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EXII Round 1

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Real comment later. Sleep now. It's 2am. I have work tomorrow blah!!1 :stare:

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OCT folder - [link]

Okay...

So it turns out August was a bad time to write anything. I was visiting family for most of the month and internet hobbies got pushed down to the bottom rung of the priority ladder. I didn't have much access to the computer and most of the writing was done in some A6 notebook whenever a spare moment happened to pass by. Thank god for the deadline extension, I only managed to find time to cobble this together when I got home.
I think the result is mostly meh. I'm sure there are a hundred things that could be torn apart about this entry and I can already picture people shaking their heads while tsk-tsking me. However right now I'm just happy that I managed to get from the beginning to the end.
I don't like how the twirly break thing looks close up but I kinda scribbled that and the preview in the middle of the night. I think I'll just leave it as it is though.

Character Credits:
Bowman, Presley, Oswald, Doctor Cat © :iconstrangemund:
The Cranes © :iconladyriverlark:
Death © :iconmippins:
and unless I've missed someone the rest are mine.

Sorry if I wrote Booker (or any of the other characters) wrong but with him in particular he seems to have a pretty long history and I only managed to read his finale from the last EX.
© 2012 - 2024 nnaj
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Demoness-Melody's avatar
Defend Martha! She doesn't belong in no stable! I really enjoy how Death is like "We're going to make you fight, because deciding is hard..." there is probably a lot of truth in that statement.

What a way to start a match. Help out your opponent on accident, that is classy. Too bad that doesn't get you any points. Samsaran got mighty lucky that Presley was around.

You had a hard round on your hands with so many opponents. But you did well keeping them all in check, letting us know where they were and what they were doing. They had a good team effort going in their favor. On the flip side I really liked how you had Samsaran team up with some ghosts. In all honesty it was perfectly ironic to some degree, for Seth of course. Though we don't know what happened to Dr. Cat or the two spirits. Dr. Cat I assume is still stuck, and panicking. But the spirits just left I suppose.

Great entry for being so busy. It was a fun read and I really liked all of the details of your story.

Good Luck~